In chapter 5 you learn how to revise. This chapter advice you how you address whole paper issues while you are revising. And how revising helps you to turn your first draft into a more complate, thoughtful piece of writing. As you review your drfat for content how you make sure that all of the ideas are fully developed and organization is clear while you are revising for voice and style. What issues you may light on. When you revise your pharagraphs you may also be unclear, unorganized or poorly developed. In this section some advices help you to figure out this issues by taking a close look at your pharagraphs for focus, unity and chorence.