In this chapter there is guideline which explains to the reader how to edit a revised draft. And it continues by giving us informations about how to combine the sentences. After that we learn how to connect related ideas by expending sentences and how to edit sentences for for style and correctness. This chapter teaches us what type of words we should use for our essays and what we should avoid while editing a sentences. Also in this chapter adviced to check spelling, mechanics, usage, grammer and form.